Sunday, October 16, 2011

Stormy Rochester, Stormy Weather

      Nature can embody a variety of values or moods within a novel. Specifically, it can act as a setting of birth and renewal, or, conversely, it can be a place of raw natural instinct. In Charlotte Bronte's renowned novel, Jane Eyre, nature provides a crucial backdrop that enhances Rochester's emotional tendencies and stages within his life.
      Thornfield Hall instantly causes red flags to pop up in the reader's mind the moment it is described. It is imposing, dark, and spooky. As the story unfolds, we discover that the brooding master is keeping many secrets behind heavy, locked doors, including an insane, exotic wife. The isolated nature of Thornfield is perfect for the unfolding of all of these events. By being far apart from any interactions, except those that are prompted, such as the rare dinner parties held by Rochester, the mansion acts as a center in the novel. All interactions within the Thornfield phase of the novel are traced back to the house and surrounding countryside. This countryside emulates a reflecting screen for the mood of the circumstances presented in the novel. When Rochester declares his love for Jane, it is a sunny day beside the flowing stream, with wildflowers and butterflies abundant. On the other hand, thunder crashes and rain comes down in torrents when Rochester's crazy wife tries to burn him alive. The sheer power demonstrated by the weather in the countryside can be seen also in Rochester when he veers towards the more extreme end of his emotional spectrum.  The country setting reacts in tandem with Rochester's emotions to provide a unique effect on the reader.
       At the conclusion of the novel, we find a destroyed Rochester regaining his sense of vitality in a, yet again, isolated setting. This time he is in a small cabin in the forest. This more humble set of circumstances reflects his fall from grace, more literally his fall from his burning ancestral home, and his recovery in the forest his symbolic of a rebirth. Rather than recovering in luxury, he retreats with his most trusted servant. Possibly more important, his loss of sight allows him to focus on reorganizing himself mentally. This loss of an important sense is seen in the densely wooded, very isolated setting he is in. With the return of Jane, his rebirth, exemplified in the nature-oriented woodland setting, is complete. He is then free to move on with his new life. It is important to note that as he grows in to his new, better habits, he even gains back some of his vision, resulting in the precious moment when he sees the color of his son's eyes.
       The isolated settings in Jane Eyre reflect a variety of character traits in Rochester, including his temper and brooding moods. The weather, as part of the setting, enhances these effects. The slightly different forms of Rochester that can be witnessed in the novel can thus be witnessed in the surrounding countryside.

3 comments:

  1. Wow! I never would have thought about the weather in this novel compared to Rochester's emotions! It's been a while since I've read it, so I was most likely too small to understand.
    Even if you didn't post the prompt her, it was pretty clear as to what the prompt was about in your introduction sentence.
    I especially liked your first paragraph- it explained the correlation very well, and even someone who hadn't read the novel before could see it! However, I felt that the use of language in this essay could improve a bit. I felt like many words used weren't as formal as they should be. Since this is an AP Lit essay, some higher level vocabulary and generally elevated language wouldn't hurt!
    Also, try not to explain what happens in the novel as much; AP readers most likely have read it before, and summarizing the novel won't help to improve your point. Just write enough to let the reader know what scene is being mentioned.
    Great job!
    Erin

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  2. I've always meant to read Jane Eyre, and this essay made me want to read it even more. Well done. Because I don't know what prompt you were responding to, I'm having trouble finding the essay's faults. If your prompt was about nature, then the discussion of the mansion is irrelevant, and shouldn't be as emphasised. If it was about setting, maybe drop some of the nature since you don't seem to have as much evidence about it.

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  3. I remember learning in Brit Lit about how weather effects a novel. The combination of weather and nature in this essay are very smart and they really tie in Jane Eyre. I've heard mixed things about Jane Eyre but now I really want to look into it.

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