Tuesday, March 6, 2012

The Conch Shell, II

1970 Also. Choose a work of recognized literary merit in which a specific inanimate object (e.g., a seashell, a handkerchief, a painting) is important, and write an essay in which you show how two or three of the purposes the object serves are related to one another.

(This version has taken into account the peer comments)
       Inamimate objects, such as a flag, can serve a variety of purposes: they can bring people together or represent specific values. In Lord of the Flies by William Golding, the conch shell is an important object discovered upon arrival on the island. The conch shell serves as a signal to bring the group of boys together, an object of power and control, and finally a symbol of order on the island. In this microcosm of society, the conch shell is analogous to money; the source of power in the real world.
       When Ralph and Piggy first arrive on the island, they know that some of the boys from the plane crash must also be on the same island with them. The conch shell serves as a auditory signal to bring the boys together. By blowing the conch, Piggy establishes a common meeting point for the group, which in turn creates a sense of community and identity among the boys. The boys begin to exhibit social tendencies found within the adult world, such as the need for a leader and the resulting tensions from the search for power.
       Piggy remains in possession of the conch because, as a stout boy with health issues, he realizes that his only source of power in that primal microcosm of adult society is the conch. The conch, which brought the boys together, continues to be an object of control. By establishing the precedent of the power of speech in anyone who holds the conch, Piggy hopes to create power for himself in a democratic way as the boys begin the deliberations to find a leader. This can be related to the situation within the adult world, where often the ones with most money and power are heard the most.
       The situation on the island remains relatively organized and orderly as the conch shell remains present. The group of boys go about choosing a leader, allotting specific tasks, and carrying out those tasks without any major problems. The conch, however, loses its vibrancy and power as tensions between groups on the island erupt. With the death of the conch's constant guardian, Piggy, the conch is also shattered and pure animal violence breaks out among the boys. The chaos that ensues is a testament to the conch's role as a symbol of order. We can see this circumstance in modern soceity when money is not of object, in third world countries, for example, and poverty and disease are seen. While money can be a source of corruption, it is also a source of order and growth.
       The conch begins the novel as a signal to bring the boys together through its ability to produce sound. It becomes a object of power, specifically for Piggy, and then is revealed as a symbol of order that, when destroyed, releases a wave of barbarity crashing down on the boys. Overall, the power the conch possesses manifests itself in different forms that create various reactions from the boys throughout the novel. This is unique ability is reflected by the role money plays in adult society.

3 comments:

  1. I like your claim however, it could be summed up in a much shorter manner. You stated how the conch lead to power and control an ample amount of times. The conclusion introduced that idea that it created many reactions among the boys, which seems too obvious to be stated again. Other than repetition, I think your ideas flowed very smoothly and you did a good job of supporting your claim.

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  2. I thought your ideas flowed very nicely throughout your entire essay, but I think you should have equally distributed your explanation on both the conch intact and destroyed. Overall, good job.

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  3. Cool essay, Caitlin! An interesting thesis and good support. You've used plain style pretty effectively, as well.

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